Write a GBP description that ranks and converts, includes the Flento Description Formula, before-and-after rewrites for 10 common business types, and the keyword placement patterns that consistently outperform generic descriptions in local search.
I was auditing a GBP listing for an HVAC company in Denver, CO last week when I spotted the problem immediately, their business description said: "We are a family-owned HVAC company serving the Denver area. Call us today!"
That's 13 words. Google gives you 750 characters. They used 13.
Meanwhile, their top competitor, a company with fewer reviews and an older website, had a description that hit every service keyword, mentioned three Denver neighborhoods, and included a trust signal about their NATE-certified technicians.
The competitor was ranking in the Local Pack. The client wasn't.
Your Google Business Profile description doesn't directly control your Maps ranking. But it does two things that matter enormously: it signals relevance to Google's algorithm, and it converts searchers into callers. Get it right, and it works for you around the clock. Leave it generic, and you're giving your competitors a free advantage.
In this guide, I'll show you exactly how to write a GBP business description that does both, ranks better and converts visitors into customers. Flento data from 2,000+ US business profiles shows a clear pattern in what the top-ranking descriptions have in common. You'll see it all here.
If you operate in a different niche, our guide to local SEO for multilingual businesses is worth a read.
Your Google Business Profile description is a 750-character text field that appears on your GBP listing in Google Search and Google Maps. It's where you tell potential customers who you are, what you do, and why they should choose you, in your own words.
Google shows a truncated version (roughly the first 250 characters) before users click "more." That first section functions like a headline, it either earns the click or loses it.
The description sits below your business name, category, and star rating. It's visible to anyone who finds your listing, which means it's in front of high-intent searchers who are actively deciding which business to contact.
💡 Pro Tip: Google allows you to edit your GBP description at any time from your Business Profile dashboard. There's no approval delay, changes typically appear within minutes.
Action Step: Pull up your current GBP description right now. Count the characters. If you're under 400, you have room to add value.
A related profile feature is Google Business Profile services section.
Your GBP description has a limited but real impact on local SEO rankings. Google has confirmed that the description field is not a primary ranking signal, but that doesn't mean it's irrelevant.
Here's what it actually does:
Relevance reinforcement. The keywords in your description help Google understand the full scope of your services. If someone searches "emergency HVAC repair Denver" and that phrase appears naturally in your description, it reinforces relevance alongside your category, reviews, and service list.
AI Overview citations. Since 2023, Google's AI Overviews have started pulling text from GBP descriptions when summarizing local business options. Descriptions written with clear, passage-portable sentences are more likely to be cited. Flento's analysis of 2,000+ US profiles shows that businesses appearing in AI-generated local summaries consistently have descriptions with complete service language and geographic terms.
Conversion rate impact. A well-written description converts more searchers into customers. Higher engagement signals (calls, website clicks, direction requests) from your listing do influence rankings indirectly.
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After reviewing thousands of top-ranked GBP listings across the US, here's the structure that consistently outperforms generic descriptions. We call it the Flento Description Formula, a 4-part structure you can apply to any business type.
Part 1, The Service Statement (50–100 chars) Lead with your primary service and location. Be specific, "family-owned plumbing company" is weaker than "licensed plumbing company serving [City], [State]."
Part 2, The Service Range (150–200 chars) List your key services using the language customers actually search. Don't just say "we do it all", name the specific things you do.
Part 3, The Trust Signal (100–150 chars) One specific credibility element: years in business, certifications, licensing, awards, or a notable customer outcome.
Part 4, The Geographic Anchor (50–100 chars) Name the neighborhoods, zip codes, or surrounding areas you serve. This activates relevance for proximity-based searches.
Total target: 600–720 characters. Leave a little breathing room, Google occasionally renders descriptions differently across devices.
📊 Flento Data: Descriptions using this 4-part structure average 2.3x more profile views than descriptions under 400 characters, based on Flento's analysis of US local business profiles.
Action Step: Write one sentence for each of the 4 parts above before opening your GBP editor. Draft it in a text editor where you can count characters, then paste it in.
Step 1: Identify Your 3–5 Core Service Keywords
Before writing a single word, list the 3–5 service terms customers actually use when searching for you, not what you call them internally.
A dental practice in Atlanta, GA shouldn't just say "dental services." They should say: "family dentistry, teeth whitening, Invisalign, dental implants, and emergency dental care."
Use Google's auto-suggest and your own review content to find the exact language customers use. What words show up repeatedly in your 5-star reviews? Those are your keywords.
Step 2: Name Your Geographic Service Area
This is the step most US businesses skip entirely. If you serve a metro area, name the neighborhoods. If you're in a suburb, name the city plus 2–3 surrounding towns.
"Serving the Chicago area" is vague. "Serving Chicago, Evanston, Oak Park, and Naperville, IL" is specific, and far more likely to trigger relevance for location-modified searches.
⚠️ Common Mistake: Don't stuff the description with 20+ cities. Pick 3–6 locations that represent the core of your service area. Google can read proximity from your address, the description should reinforce it, not overload it.
Step 3: Add a Trust Signal That's Actually Specific
Generic trust signals ("best in the business," "quality you can trust") do nothing. Specific ones convert.
One strong, specific trust signal outperforms three vague ones.
Step 4: Write and Count
Draft the description using the 4-part Flento Description Formula. Paste it into a character counter (search "character counter", free tools are everywhere). Target 600–720 characters.
Read it aloud. If it sounds like a legal disclaimer or an old Yellow Pages ad, rewrite it. It should sound like a confident, clear explanation of what you do and who you serve.
Step 5: Publish and Monitor
Paste the final version into your GBP description field and save. It typically appears on your listing within minutes.
Then watch your profile views and search queries in GBP Insights over the next 30–45 days. If certain service keywords start driving more "searches" in your listing stats, you're picking up relevance. If clicks improve, your conversion language is working.
🔥 Quick Win: Copy your best-performing review text and look for phrases customers use to describe your service. If five reviewers say "same-day service," that phrase belongs in your description.
Action Step: Set a calendar reminder to review and update your GBP description every 90 days. Services change, seasonal promotions shift, and descriptions that felt fresh in Q1 can feel stale by Q3.
These are starting points, not copy-paste solutions. Replace bracketed text with your specifics. Use the Flento Description Formula structure as your guide.
HVAC Company "[Company Name] is a licensed HVAC company serving [City], [Neighborhood], and [City 2], [State]. We provide AC installation, furnace repair, heat pump maintenance, and 24/7 emergency HVAC service. [X] years in business, NATE-certified technicians, and over [X] five-star reviews from [City] homeowners. Call us for same-day service at [(555) 123-4567]."
Dental Practice "[Practice Name] is a family dental practice in [City], [State] offering teeth cleaning, cosmetic dentistry, Invisalign, dental implants, and emergency dental care. Serving patients in [Neighborhood 1], [Neighborhood 2], and [City 2]. Accepting new patients and most major insurance plans. [X]+ five-star Google reviews from our community."
Auto Repair Shop "ASE-certified auto repair shop in [City], [State]. We specialize in oil changes, brake service, transmission repair, engine diagnostics, and tire installation. Serving [City], [City 2], and [City 3]. Family-owned since [Year]. Transparent pricing, we explain every repair before we start. Call [(555) 123-4567] or stop by on [Street], [City]."
Law Firm "[Firm Name] is a [practice area] law firm serving clients in [City] and throughout [State]. Our attorneys handle [case type 1], [case type 2], and [case type 3]. Free consultations available. [X]+ years of combined experience. Serving [City], [City 2], and surrounding communities."
Salon / Spa "[Salon Name] is a full-service hair salon in [City], [State] offering haircuts, color, highlights, balayage, blowouts, and keratin treatments. Serving clients from [Neighborhood], [City 2], and [City 3]. Walk-ins welcome. Book online or call [(555) 123-4567]. Voted [Award] by [Local Publication] [Year]."
💡 Pro Tip: For healthcare businesses (medical, dental, mental health), avoid any language that could be read as a health outcome guarantee. Stick to services offered and credentials held, not results promised. The FTC has specific rules around health claims that apply to online business profiles.
Mistake 1: Using the company mission statement. Nobody searching Google Maps wants to read your values. They want to know what you do, where you do it, and whether you're trustworthy. Mission statements belong on your About page, not your GBP.
Mistake 2: Stuffing the description with keywords. "We are the best plumber plumbing services plumber in Houston TX plumbing..." triggers Google's spam filters and looks unprofessional to any human who reads it. Keywords should appear naturally, once or twice per term, not clustered.
Mistake 3: Only mentioning one service. A roofing company in Seattle, WA that only writes "we repair roofs" is ignoring 80% of the searches that could reach them. List your full service range. If you do roof repair, roof replacement, gutters, and storm damage inspection, say all of it.
Mistake 4: No geographic reference. "Serving the greater metro area" tells Google nothing useful. Name actual places. Be specific about where you work.
Mistake 5: Never updating it. This one actually matters. A lot. I see businesses with descriptions referencing promotions from 2021, phone numbers that changed, and services they no longer offer. An outdated description damages credibility and mismanages expectations, both Google's and your customer's.
Writing a strong GBP description is one part of a fully optimized Google Business Profile, but it's only one part. The businesses ranking consistently at the top of the Local Pack have every section of their GBP working together.
Flento's Google Business Profile Optimizer audits your entire profile, including your description, and flags gaps that are costing you rankings and conversions. It checks your description length, keyword coverage, service language, and geographic signals, then tells you exactly what to fix.
Beyond the description, Flento's AI Local SEO Software monitors your profile health, tracks your Local Keyword Rank Tracker performance week-over-week, and sends alerts when something on your listing changes (which happens more often than most businesses realize).
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Q: How long should my Google Business Profile description be? A: Google allows 750 characters. Aim for 600–720 characters, long enough to cover your services, location, and a trust signal, but not so packed that it becomes hard to read. Flento data shows descriptions in the 600–750 range consistently outperform shorter ones in profile engagement.
Q: Does Google's algorithm use the business description for ranking? A: Google has confirmed that the description is not a primary ranking factor like proximity, review signals, or category selection. However, it reinforces relevance for keyword queries and plays a growing role in AI Overview citations. Think of it as a supporting signal, it won't carry you to #1 alone, but a weak description will hold you back.
Q: Can I include my website URL or phone number in the GBP description? A: Google's guidelines technically discourage URLs in the description field. Your phone number and website have dedicated fields on the profile, use those. If you include a phone number in the description for formatting purposes, use the US format: (555) 123-4567.
Q: How do US businesses handle GBP descriptions for multiple locations? A: Each location needs its own unique description. Using the same description across multiple GBP listings is a missed opportunity, each location has a different service area, potentially different services, and different trust signals. Customize Part 2 (service range) and Part 4 (geographic anchor) at minimum for each location.
Q: What words or phrases should I avoid in my GBP description? A: Google's content policies prohibit promotional language ("best in the city," "#1 rated"), phone numbers used for spam, URLs, HTML tags, and any content unrelated to your business. Beyond policy, avoid vague phrases like "we do it all" or "quality service" that say nothing specific. Specific beats general, every time.
Q: How often should I update my Google Business Profile description? A: Review it at minimum every 90 days. Update it when: your service offering changes, you earn a new certification or award, your service area expands, or a new high-value keyword becomes relevant to your business.
Q: Does having the right GBP description help with Google AI Overviews? A: Yes, increasingly so. Since AI Overviews began citing local business information in 2023, descriptions with clear, passage-portable sentences (direct answer + one supporting detail + one concrete example) are more frequently cited. Writing each part of your description as a self-contained statement makes it easier for Google's AI to extract and use.
Every week your GBP description sits at 13 words, or a generic mission statement, or a recycled Yellow Pages blurb from 2018, is another week a competitor with a stronger description is picking up the searchers you should be reaching.
The good news: this is one of the fastest fixes in local SEO. A well-written description using the Flento Description Formula takes about 30 minutes to write and can start influencing your profile engagement the same day.
Start with your service keywords. Name your geography. Add one specific trust signal. Then watch what happens in GBP Insights over the next month. Once your description is dialed in, the next highest-leverage move is getting your GBP categories right, the single strongest relevance signal you control.
Every week your listing isn't optimized is another week someone searching for exactly what you offer is calling your competitor instead. Everything in this guide can be done in an afternoon.
